1. **Introduction Enhancement**: The opening paragraph could briefly
mention that not all moles with dark spots are dangerous but that being
cautious and informed is key. This balances urgency with reassurance. 2.
**Clearer Structure**: Use subheadings for each section (e.g., “What Are
Atypical Moles?” before “The ABCDEs of Moles”) to create better flow and
organization. 3. **Preventative Measures**: Expand on sun safety practices.
Mention specific sunscreen types (e.g., broad-spectrum SPF 30+) and additional
protective measures like seeking shade. 4. **Empowerment Focus**: Highlight
that self-monitoring can significantly aid early detection and that most
cases are manageable if caught early, to reassure readers
